I disagree. I think it sounds great. It deals with two of the key things I like least about my gym:
* It's a space with so many social possibilities, but 95% of the time everyone acts as if everyone else were invisible.
* All I get for entertainment is banks of TVs with mind-numbing rolling news coverage, mind-numbing sports, and mind-numbing (and slightly pornographic) music videos.
If I wasn't in the middle of a PhD I'd be tempted to have a go myself.
* It's a space with so many social possibilities, but 95% of the time everyone acts as if everyone else were invisible.
* All I get for entertainment is banks of TVs with mind-numbing rolling news coverage, mind-numbing sports, and mind-numbing (and slightly pornographic) music videos.
If I wasn't in the middle of a PhD I'd be tempted to have a go myself.